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August 2nd, 2013, 1:18 pm

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Reply SmackJeevesNinja (Guest), August 6th, 2013, 6:37 pm

Word Choice Note: The sentence "Sometimes I would go back in time," is a bit awkward. ("go back in time" implies he has the power to time travel.)

Perhaps "Sometimes I wish I could go back in time," would work better.

You could also use the words "reminisce" or "wonder" rather than "go back in time." Wonder is most common.
(If you do this, get rid of "would." "Sometimes I wonder...")

Also, you draw Mew really well! I've always had a hard time with it's design, so I admire you for that.

Reply Liokora, August 7th, 2013, 1:47 am

@SmackJeevesNinja: Thank you again for your help and nice comment ! :)

I changed the sentence into "Sometimes I wish I could go back in time and change the past" I hope it's better ! :3

Reply Pure umbreon, December 14th, 2016, 7:03 am

Wow... That girl is helping a Mew! Mew, Mew!

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