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Prologue - Page 017

August 7th, 2013, 1:50 am

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Reply Liokora, August 7th, 2013, 1:55 am

Here is an extra update !! :)

I would like to say a big thank you to people who helping me to correct my mistakes ! And also thanks to people who reading this story ! ^-^

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Reply Ziliath, August 7th, 2013, 3:06 am

hi again.
just a grammar correction.

"I almost Finished to prepare everything"
is somewhat a disjointed sentance, it sounds like you were trying to say
"I've almost finished preparing everything"
(i assume "I have")

"To" is not needed, just put "ing" on the end of the next word.

Reply Liokora, August 7th, 2013, 3:24 am

@Ziliath: Aw thanks ! :)

This is nice of you to give me an explanation *_* My english will maybe become better with time ! :3

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