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Chapter 1 - p008

June 1st, 2014, 9:44 am

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Reply Liokora, June 1st, 2014, 9:49 am

Early update this week ! Because tomorow is my last day of school test and I wont be at home all the day ! '-'

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Reply Ziliath, June 1st, 2014, 6:30 pm

nice art as usual

sooo in the far future ... he gonna be Charazard X or Y?

also a number corrections
3rd panel second line. it would sound better if you dropped "Of" but not necessary.
Third line Drop the "S" off "Shines"
your asking a question about a non plural attribute. and your not using it as a pretext word. aka "Shines like metal"
(alternatively you can ask "why is he all shiny...?")

same panel Oak : just drop the " 've", its not needed. the sentence still implys the same thing but its more commonly used without it. if you do keep it you would have to put a "," after "you" if you drop the 'Ve you wouldn't need to.

Panel 6(or 7) drop the S on "Helps". he shouldn't be implying plural.

last panel what is "Tss"?

Reply gothaman1, June 1st, 2014, 9:17 pm

perhaps the real reason oak wanted to keep the charmander was because he was a shiny.

Reply Lady Darkrina, June 2nd, 2014, 7:57 am

I hope you do well in your test, I wish you the best of luck hun~ ^^

Reply Liokora, June 3rd, 2014, 9:52 am

@Ziliath: Thanks for the corrections Ziliath ! I don't know what I would do without you !! :3 I wish be able to travel to England or USA someday to become more confortable with english T^T

I think this will be a Y Charizard ! But Grimm have to grow a lot before that hehe :D

@gothaman: If I was the professor Oak, I think I would keep it too *-*

@Lady Darkina: Thanks !! ^-^ I just come back from school and I'm accepted for the 2nd year! \('-')/

Reply Ziliath, June 3rd, 2014, 10:37 am

@Liokora:

England? USA? Y No Australia!???

we have awesome stuff here too :P
the beaches are awesome!

Anyway, glad to help, this is one of my favorite comics along side Victory fire and mokepon.

Reply Liokora, June 3rd, 2014, 1:03 pm

@Ziliath: Oww ! So you're Australian ! I would love to visit Australia one day too *-* And you have kangoroo ! o.o !!!!

Reply GargetheGengar (Guest), June 7th, 2014, 8:36 pm

So is this just a story are are you basing the pokemon off a game you played yourself?

This has been such a good story so far!

Reply Liokora, June 8th, 2014, 2:20 am

@GargetheGengar: Hi ! This is just a story about pokemon, even if the begining is very similar to the game, you'll see things change progressively ^-^

Reply 3jaustin, June 8th, 2014, 4:48 pm

1 in 8,192 chance of encounter, and she gets one as a starter, I'm still shocked and I called it!

Reply Naiko, July 21st, 2014, 11:14 am

XD tu l'aurais pas fait en version française ? ( enfin une âme française par ici XD je peux parler plus facilement youpiii)

Reply Naiko, July 21st, 2014, 11:14 am

Tu as eu directement un chromatique ? XD sérieux ?

Reply Liokora, July 23rd, 2014, 1:34 pm

@Naiko: Ahh ! Une française ! Ca fait plaisir d'en voir ^-^

Par contre, je n'ai pas fais de VF pour Pokemon Alpha ;( Comme la plus part (j'allais dire "tous" >.< ) les lecteurs parlent anglais ._. Il faudrait que je reprenne toutes les pages pour les remettre en français :p (peut être que je finirai par le faire si c'est plus pratique pour certains, quand j'aurai un peu plus de temps :3 )

Et sinon, ce n'est pas un Nuzlocke, du coup j'arrange un peu l'histoire comme bon me semble ^-^ (ceci dit, j'ai bel et bien un salamèche shiny :D )

Reply Naiko, July 24th, 2014, 11:58 am

@Liokora: Yeah alors tiens moi au courante si tu compte traduire ^^ ( pour m'a part je dois dire que je fais une version FR du Nuzlocke que je fais en BD + Anglaise j'avoue que c'est prise de temps pas possible ><) Sinon veinarde va pour Salamèche XD moi c'était un Feunnec chroma que j'ai eu femelle...'_' ! ( XD c'est plaisant de pouvoir parler sans penser à tout traduire !)

Reply Liokora, July 24th, 2014, 1:01 pm

@Naiko: C'est encore plus de chance ! o.o Déjà qu'il faut en avoir un peu pour que ce soit une femelle, mais en plus chromatique *_*

Reply Naiko, July 24th, 2014, 1:04 pm

@Liokora: XD je suis une SH dans l'âme, la chasse de chromatiques c'est bon dada, mais en Nuzlocke débuter avec un chromatique c'est vraiment de la veine *o*

Reply LKWayvern, November 23rd, 2014, 8:25 am

Shine shine!
It's a shine shine!
Yay, shine shine! *hugs*

Reply Sixal, April 19th, 2015, 11:03 am

oh snap did u rly get a shiny started? that's lucky.

Reply fyreblazes, June 5th, 2017, 3:51 am

so um, what gender is it? I want to know just how insane your luck is...

Reply Liokora, June 5th, 2017, 2:39 pm

@fyreblazes: He's a mâle hehe ^^;

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