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Chapter 1 - p023

September 8th, 2014, 11:29 am

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Reply Ziliath, September 8th, 2014, 1:16 pm

Nice little chat with blue :)
eevee's face in panel 2 and 5 is like "Im snug, im warm, and i love it" :)

Also Drop the s off of "Informations" (No s is both singular and plural) and change Legendary to legendaries. (which is its plural form, in that context) or change it to "Knows a lot about that legend" if you want to refer to mew only.

(I hope my corrections dont start get annoying :P)

Reply Liokora, September 8th, 2014, 4:38 pm

@Ziliath: Evee is so fluffy *-* About your corrections, it will never be annoying ! On the contrary, I'm very grateful for that, you're always helping me T^T !! And with explanations, thank you so much <3

@Vye Brante: Thanks for the correction as well ! :D And for your nice comment ^-^

Reply Johnd813 (Guest), November 11th, 2014, 5:56 am

Very informative post.Really thank you! Awesome. ddfcacdaaccd

Reply Vye Brante, September 8th, 2014, 2:22 pm

And it should be "tell me more about that mew" instead of "say me."

But otherwise a good page. I like the lighting effects a lot.

Reply Red5 (Guest), September 8th, 2014, 8:56 pm

Which game is this supposed to be? Or is it not based on a game?

Reply Liokora, September 9th, 2014, 1:15 am

@Red5: It's based on pokemon universe in general ^^ (both games, animes, mangas). The problem is that some characters have differents stories in each media, so I decided to make my own mix :3

Reply Lady Darkrina, September 9th, 2014, 8:07 am

Ho ho ho well this is getting quite interesting~

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